My Vampire System
Author:Yuna Park
Volume 1 — Book 1
Chapter 1: A Kingdom Remembered
The letter arrived without a courier, which was the first of the day’s problems.
The mana in the air thickened until it pressed against his skin like a held breath. Snow fell through the broken roof and did not melt where it landed on her hands. The girl in the mirror moved a fraction late, and smiled a fraction early. They buried the sword rather than break it, which told him everything.
Dawn arrived reluctantly, the way a witness arrives at a trial. The system window blinked into existence, patient as a tax collector. Steel rang once, and the sound hung in the corridor far longer than it should have. He had died once already this year, and found the experience overrated. Steel rang once, and the sound hung in the corridor far longer than it should have.
There were forty-one steps to the summit and he had already bled on eleven of them. The contract burned as it was signed, which the guild insisted was traditional. A thin line of frost crawled up the doorframe, spelling out a word in a language older than the kingdom. Every instinct he had spent nine years sharpening told him to run.
She had been told the tower ate its climbers; nobody had mentioned that it chewed. Nothing in the prophecy had mentioned paperwork. Snow fell through the broken roof and did not melt where it landed on her hands. She had never seen a spell apologise before.
Two of the seven seals were already broken when they reached the vault. The girl in the mirror moved a fraction late, and smiled a fraction early.
Two of the seven seals were already broken when they reached the vault. Snow fell through the broken roof and did not melt where it landed on her hands. Somewhere below, a bell began to toll for a funeral that had not happened yet.
The system window blinked into existence, patient as a tax collector. Power without a ledger, his master used to say, is simply a landslide.
He had prepared nine arguments and needed none of them. The blade was unremarkable in every way except the one that mattered. Every instinct he had spent nine years sharpening told him to run.
Power without a ledger, his master used to say, is simply a landslide. The beast did not roar. That was the part that frightened him. Dawn arrived reluctantly, the way a witness arrives at a trial.
She had been told the tower ate its climbers; nobody had mentioned that it chewed. He had died once already this year, and found the experience overrated. He took the stairs two at a time and the consequences three at a time.
Her shadow reached the far wall a full second before she did. The blade was unremarkable in every way except the one that mattered.
“A Kingdom Remembered”
Ren counted three heartbeats before the sigil on the floor answered him. Nothing in the prophecy had mentioned paperwork. Outside, the rain went on doing what rain does, indifferent to the war beneath it. The old man laughed, and dust fell from the rafters in sympathy. Steel rang once, and the sound hung in the corridor far longer than it should have.
Nothing in the prophecy had mentioned paperwork. He let the silence stretch until it became a question, then refused to answer it.
They buried the sword rather than break it, which told him everything. The mana in the air thickened until it pressed against his skin like a held breath. The mana in the air thickened until it pressed against his skin like a held breath. Two of the seven seals were already broken when they reached the vault.
She had been told the tower ate its climbers; nobody had mentioned that it chewed. The blade was unremarkable in every way except the one that mattered. He had died once already this year, and found the experience overrated. The system window blinked into existence, patient as a tax collector. The beast did not roar. That was the part that frightened him.
The messenger was still running when the message stopped being true. Her shadow reached the far wall a full second before she did.
Ren counted three heartbeats before the sigil on the floor answered him. They buried the sword rather than break it, which told him everything. Her mana core turned over once, slowly, like something waking in deep water. The beast did not roar. That was the part that frightened him. She had been told the tower ate its climbers; nobody had mentioned that it chewed.
A thin line of frost crawled up the doorframe, spelling out a word in a language older than the kingdom. She had been told the tower ate its climbers; nobody had mentioned that it chewed.
Comments5
Called it three chapters ago. The moment the seal was described as "unremarkable" I knew exactly where this was heading.
Genuinely one of the best-paced fights in the whole arc. The eight seconds line landed perfectly.
He dies at the end of the volume and comes back with the sword reforged. Screenshot this.
Reading this at 3am was a mistake and I would make it again. Thanks for the chapter!
Small thing, but the shadow reaching the wall first is such a good way to telegraph what she is without spelling it out.