My Vampire System
Author:Yuna Park
Volume 1 — Book 1
Chapter 9: Everything the Fire Left
The letter arrived without a courier, which was the first of the day’s problems.
The mana in the air thickened until it pressed against his skin like a held breath. She had been told the tower ate its climbers; nobody had mentioned that it chewed.
He took the stairs two at a time and the consequences three at a time. Wind came off the ridge carrying the smell of iron and burnt sugar. Outside, the rain went on doing what rain does, indifferent to the war beneath it. The manual had said this would hurt. The manual had been generous. There were forty-one steps to the summit and he had already bled on eleven of them.
Her shadow reached the far wall a full second before she did. There were forty-one steps to the summit and he had already bled on eleven of them. The guildmaster set down the ledger with the care of a man defusing something.
Threads of light spooled out from her fingertips and knotted themselves into a door. She had never seen a spell apologise before. Rank meant nothing here; the mountain had never learned to read a badge. Snow fell through the broken roof and did not melt where it landed on her hands.
Steel rang once, and the sound hung in the corridor far longer than it should have. He took the stairs two at a time and the consequences three at a time. The mana in the air thickened until it pressed against his skin like a held breath. The old man laughed, and dust fell from the rafters in sympathy.
He let the silence stretch until it became a question, then refused to answer it. The old man laughed, and dust fell from the rafters in sympathy. Steel rang once, and the sound hung in the corridor far longer than it should have. The city held its breath for the length of one long, ugly heartbeat. The lantern guttered, recovered, and cast his shadow in the wrong direction.
He wrote the formula in ash because ink would have remembered it. The manual had said this would hurt. The manual had been generous. She had been told the tower ate its climbers; nobody had mentioned that it chewed. Nothing in the prophecy had mentioned paperwork.
He took the stairs two at a time and the consequences three at a time. Two of the seven seals were already broken when they reached the vault. Dawn arrived reluctantly, the way a witness arrives at a trial. The system window blinked into existence, patient as a tax collector. The formation held for eight seconds longer than anyone had promised.
The blade was unremarkable in every way except the one that mattered. The beast did not roar. That was the part that frightened him. Every instinct he had spent nine years sharpening told him to run.
She had never seen a spell apologise before. He had prepared nine arguments and needed none of them. He weighed the offer, then weighed the knife, and found the knife the more honest of the two.
“Everything the Fire Left”
The messenger was still running when the message stopped being true. A thin line of frost crawled up the doorframe, spelling out a word in a language older than the kingdom. Her shadow reached the far wall a full second before she did. Wind came off the ridge carrying the smell of iron and burnt sugar.
Wind came off the ridge carrying the smell of iron and burnt sugar. Two of the seven seals were already broken when they reached the vault. The formation held for eight seconds longer than anyone had promised. The mana in the air thickened until it pressed against his skin like a held breath.
Magic, he had learned, was mostly bookkeeping performed at knifepoint. There were forty-one steps to the summit and he had already bled on eleven of them.
The mana in the air thickened until it pressed against his skin like a held breath. He had died once already this year, and found the experience overrated. The manual had said this would hurt. The manual had been generous.
Her shadow reached the far wall a full second before she did. Snow fell through the broken roof and did not melt where it landed on her hands. The contract burned as it was signed, which the guild insisted was traditional. Magic, he had learned, was mostly bookkeeping performed at knifepoint.
He had prepared nine arguments and needed none of them. He let the silence stretch until it became a question, then refused to answer it.
Comments5
Called it three chapters ago. The moment the seal was described as "unremarkable" I knew exactly where this was heading.
Genuinely one of the best-paced fights in the whole arc. The eight seconds line landed perfectly.
He dies at the end of the volume and comes back with the sword reforged. Screenshot this.
Reading this at 3am was a mistake and I would make it again. Thanks for the chapter!
Small thing, but the shadow reaching the wall first is such a good way to telegraph what she is without spelling it out.