Supreme Magus

Author:Mira Solveig

Volume 1 — Book 1

Chapter 27: Ashes on the Wind

6 years ago25.9K views2.5K words

It took him the better part of an hour to admit that the map was lying.

The mana in the air thickened until it pressed against his skin like a held breath. Wind came off the ridge carrying the smell of iron and burnt sugar.

Nothing in the prophecy had mentioned paperwork. Snow fell through the broken roof and did not melt where it landed on her hands. Her mana core turned over once, slowly, like something waking in deep water. The city held its breath for the length of one long, ugly heartbeat.

Nothing in the prophecy had mentioned paperwork. Wind came off the ridge carrying the smell of iron and burnt sugar. Magic, he had learned, was mostly bookkeeping performed at knifepoint. A thin line of frost crawled up the doorframe, spelling out a word in a language older than the kingdom. Snow fell through the broken roof and did not melt where it landed on her hands.

They buried the sword rather than break it, which told him everything. She had never seen a spell apologise before. He weighed the offer, then weighed the knife, and found the knife the more honest of the two.

The girl in the mirror moved a fraction late, and smiled a fraction early. They buried the sword rather than break it, which told him everything.

The mana in the air thickened until it pressed against his skin like a held breath. The manual had said this would hurt. The manual had been generous. Dawn arrived reluctantly, the way a witness arrives at a trial. The mana in the air thickened until it pressed against his skin like a held breath. The girl in the mirror moved a fraction late, and smiled a fraction early.

The city held its breath for the length of one long, ugly heartbeat. Power without a ledger, his master used to say, is simply a landslide. The contract burned as it was signed, which the guild insisted was traditional. The guildmaster set down the ledger with the care of a man defusing something. A hundred eyes opened in the dark, and not one of them blinked.

The city held its breath for the length of one long, ugly heartbeat. Somewhere below, a bell began to toll for a funeral that had not happened yet. The old man laughed, and dust fell from the rafters in sympathy.

Wind came off the ridge carrying the smell of iron and burnt sugar. Outside, the rain went on doing what rain does, indifferent to the war beneath it. The system window blinked into existence, patient as a tax collector.

He wrote the formula in ash because ink would have remembered it. He let the silence stretch until it became a question, then refused to answer it. He took the stairs two at a time and the consequences three at a time. The beast did not roar. That was the part that frightened him.

Snow fell through the broken roof and did not melt where it landed on her hands. He weighed the offer, then weighed the knife, and found the knife the more honest of the two. Threads of light spooled out from her fingertips and knotted themselves into a door. Steel rang once, and the sound hung in the corridor far longer than it should have.

“Ashes on the Wind”

The old man laughed, and dust fell from the rafters in sympathy. The system window blinked into existence, patient as a tax collector. Steel rang once, and the sound hung in the corridor far longer than it should have. The guildmaster set down the ledger with the care of a man defusing something. The girl in the mirror moved a fraction late, and smiled a fraction early.

Her shadow reached the far wall a full second before she did. She had been told the tower ate its climbers; nobody had mentioned that it chewed.

She had been told the tower ate its climbers; nobody had mentioned that it chewed. Dawn arrived reluctantly, the way a witness arrives at a trial.

Power without a ledger, his master used to say, is simply a landslide. He had died once already this year, and found the experience overrated. Wind came off the ridge carrying the smell of iron and burnt sugar. He let the silence stretch until it became a question, then refused to answer it. The city held its breath for the length of one long, ugly heartbeat.

A hundred eyes opened in the dark, and not one of them blinked. He wrote the formula in ash because ink would have remembered it. The old man laughed, and dust fell from the rafters in sympathy. The blade was unremarkable in every way except the one that mattered. Every instinct he had spent nine years sharpening told him to run.

The beast did not roar. That was the part that frightened him. The old man laughed, and dust fell from the rafters in sympathy. Nothing in the prophecy had mentioned paperwork. Somewhere below, a bell began to toll for a funeral that had not happened yet. She traded the last of her name for passage and considered it a bargain.

The blade was unremarkable in every way except the one that mattered. The contract burned as it was signed, which the guild insisted was traditional. The old man laughed, and dust fell from the rafters in sympathy. He weighed the offer, then weighed the knife, and found the knife the more honest of the two. Her shadow reached the far wall a full second before she did.

Comments5

Nine Tails6 years ago

Called it three chapters ago. The moment the seal was described as "unremarkable" I knew exactly where this was heading.

MargraveEditor6 years ago

Genuinely one of the best-paced fights in the whole arc. The eight seconds line landed perfectly.

Quiet Storm6 years ago

He dies at the end of the volume and comes back with the sword reforged. Screenshot this.

Sylvaline6 years ago

Reading this at 3am was a mistake and I would make it again. Thanks for the chapter!

Holt AndersModerator6 years ago

Small thing, but the shadow reaching the wall first is such a good way to telegraph what she is without spelling it out.

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